英文翻译一日练

Q168

1.阀门进气口在装配过程中防护不当致使个别阀门进气口外表螺纹碰伤，密封性能降低，从而阀门关闭时可以探测出泄露；
The valve inlet in the assembly process was not protected, it caused appearance thread of individual valve inlet to bruise,  so that their sealed performance was reduced, thus leakage was detected on shut off valve.
2.装配过程中没有进行100%的阀门外观目视检查。
In assembly process there wasn’t 100% visual inspection of valve appearance.
3.修订《产品搬运、包装和防护程序》，对装配过程中的产品采取措施进行防护；
Revised “ the product handling, packaging and protective procedure ”,  and  took measures to protective for the products in the assembly process.
4.在阀门组合件组装过程中增加一道工序，对阀门外观进行100%目视检查。
Add one process in the assembly process of the valve lockout motorized, 100% visual inspection of valve appearance.
5.已修订程序，采取了产品防护措施；Already revised procedure, and taken the product protection measures.
6.已增加对阀门外观100%目视检查工序。Already added one process, 100% visual inspection of valve appearance.
7.完善相关产品防护措施；Perfected the relevant product protective measures.
8.对相关产品外观采取100%目视检查。Took 100% visual inspection for relevant product appearance.
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志利

我感觉到这样翻译可以的呀。

wilson

1.阀门进气口在装配过程中防护不当致使个别阀门进气口外表螺纹碰伤，密封性能降低，从而阀门关闭时可以探测出泄露；
The valve inlet in the assembly process was not protected, it caused appearance thread of individual valve inlet to bruise,  so that their sealed performance（so that the sealability gets lower) was reduced, thus leakage was detected on shut off valve.外表螺纹？还是外螺纹（external thread)？
2.装配过程中没有进行100%的阀门外观目视检查。
In assembly process there wasn’t 100% visual inspection of valve appearance there was no 100% visual inspection of valve appearance.
3.修订《产品搬运、包装和防护程序》，对装配过程中的产品采取措施进行防护；
Revised “ the product handling, packaging and protective procedure ”,  and  took measures(countermeasure） to protective（protect/ the protection) for the products in the assembly process.
4.在阀门组合件组装过程中增加一道工序，对阀门外观进行100%目视检查。
Add one process(section） in the assembly process of the valve lockout motorized, 100% visual inspection of valve appearance.
5.已修订程序，采取了产品防护措施；Already revised procedure, and taken the product protection measures（countermeasure）.
6.已增加对阀门外观100%目视检查工序。Already added one process, 100% visual inspection of valve appearance.
7.完善相关产品防护措施；Perfected the relevant product protective measures（countermeasure）.
8.对相关产品外观采取100%目视检查。Took 100% visual inspection for relevant product appearance.
欢迎校对！