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发表于 2012-9-9 17:48:53 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

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本帖最后由 Jim 于 2012-9-9 19:03 编辑

Any mistakes?
1. New York Knicks want to draft a power forward who can rebound, with strong defensive skills, and who can score.
2. His height is taller than me.
发表于 2012-9-9 19:23:59 | 显示全部楼层
"New York Knicks want to draft a power forward who can rebound, with strong defensive skills, and who can score."
可以修改为“New York Knicks wants to draft a power forward who can rebound, with strong defensive skills, and who can score.”
发表于 2012-9-9 19:26:28 | 显示全部楼层
His height is taller than me
可以修改为“His height is taller than mine”
发表于 2012-9-9 20:26:09 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 ccsspp454 于 2012-9-9 20:28 编辑


可以修改为“New York Knicks wants to draft a power forward .He can  rebound, with strong defensive skills, and can score.”
发表于 2012-9-9 20:28:17 | 显示全部楼层
ccsspp454 发表于 2012-9-9 20:26
可以修改为“New York Knicks wants to draft a power forward .He can can rebound, with strong defens ...

可以修改为“New York Knicks wants to draft a power forward .He not only can rebound, with strong defensive skills, but also can score.”
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