一段中文翻译练习

Q168

1.作业员在装配电机时，未用气枪将电机机壳内的杂物吹干净，杂物在电机运转过程中卡在齿轮之间导致电机卡死，门闩不工作。
In the assembly process of motor, workers didn’t clean debris within motor casing by air gun, then debris between the two gears in the motor running process would make motor stuck to death, latch was not activating.  
2.  电机2小时老化检查过程中，检查员未关注电机运转，而后续装配电机组合件测试过程中由于测试时间短，个别电机内的杂物未卡在齿轮之间，电机未出现卡死现象，导致不良电机未被侦测出来。
In the aging inspection process of motor 2 hours running, the inspectors didn’t pay attention to the motor operation,  and in the test process of subsequent motor latch assembly, due to the test time was short, and because debris within individual motor wasn’t between two gears, motor didn’t stuck, they leaded to defective motor wasn’t detected.
3.审核电机供应商，要求供应商改进电机生产工艺并做好质量监控； Auditing motor supplier, requiring it to improve the technology of motor producation and do the quality monitoring.
4.对于电机2小时的老化运行检查，生产管理人员应监管工人操作。For the aging inspection of motor 2 hours running, production management personnel must supervise workers operation.
5.已对供应商进行质量审核，供应商已改进电机生产工艺，增加了电机清洁工序并进行质量监控；Already to motor supplier quality audit. Motor supplier has already improved the relevant technology, added one process of motor cleaning, and monitored process quality.
6.已建立生产管理人员监管工人老化检查的操作制度。
Already established the operating system of production management personnel supervising the workers’ aging inspection.
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liusun3098

1，workers  常用 operator 来表达。
2，Already to motor supplier quality audit. ，maybe use :
　　Ａlready finished the motor supplier quality audit ?ro deleter the "already"
3,added one process  ,maybe can be writted : added one station .
4 ,   already in 6 , can be deleted.
my opinion .

Q168

have (has) already done 现在完成时，有时句子中省略have (has)

Q168

“workers工人”比“ operators操作工”含义更广，在工厂中指作业员二者都可以用哦

wilson

1.作业员在装配电机时，未用气枪将电机机壳内的杂物吹干净，杂物在电机运转过程中卡在齿轮之间导致电机卡死，门闩不工作。
In the assembly process of motor, workers didn’t clean debris within motor casing by air gun, then debris between the two gears in the motor running process would make motor stuck to death(make motor get stuck tightly), latch was not activating.  
2.  电机2小时老化检查过程中，检查员未关注电机运转，而后续装配电机组合件测试过程中由于测试时间短，个别电机内的杂物未卡在齿轮之间，电机未出现卡死现象，导致不良电机未被侦测出来。
In the aging inspection process of motor 2 hours running, the inspectors didn’t pay attention to the motor operation(the motor running status),  and in the test process of subsequent motor latch assembly, due to the test time was short, and because debris within individual motor wasn’t between two gears, motor didn’t  stuck, they leaded to defective motor wasn’t detected(and because there are several motors without debris getting stuck,as a result of not being detected. )
3.审核电机供应商，要求供应商改进电机生产工艺并做好质量监控； Auditing the motor supplier, requiring it(them) to improve the technology of motor producation and do the quality monitoring.
4.对于电机2小时的老化运行检查，生产管理人员应监管工人操作。For the aging inspection of motor 2 hours running, production management personnel must supervise workers' operations.
5.已对供应商进行质量审核，供应商已改进电机生产工艺，增加了电机清洁工序并进行质量监控；Already to motor supplier quality audit. Motor supplier has already improved the relevant technology, added one process(section) of motor cleaning, and monitored process quality.
6.已建立生产管理人员监管工人老化检查的操作制度。
Already established the operating system of production management personnel supervising the workers’ aging inspection.Already established the procedure of the aging inspection on supervising workers' operations by cell leaders
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Q168

1. In the assembly process of motor, workers didn’t clean debris within motor casing by air gun, then debris between the two gears in the motor running process would make motor get stuck tightly, latch was not activating.  
2. In the aging inspection process of motor 2 hours running, the inspectors didn’t pay attention to the motor running status,  and in the test process of subsequent motor latch assembly, due to the test time was short, and because individual motors didn’t get stuck due to the debris wasn’t between two gears, they leaded to defective motor wasn’t detected.     
3.  Auditing the motor supplier, requiring it to improve the technology of motor producation and do the quality monitoring.
4. For the aging inspection of motor 2 hours running, production management personnel must supervise workers’operations.
5. Already to motor supplier quality audit. Motor supplier has already improved the relevant technology, added one process of motor cleaning, and monitored process quality.
6. Already established the operating system of production management personnel supervising the workers’aging inspection.

sean008

楼主是做电机的吗？