和我一起学习英文英文邮件吧(转帖)

ccsspp454

今天我们学习的主题是“感谢咨询”
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中文正文：

亲爱的史密斯先生：
非常感谢您对我公司生产的 UL9982001 型号的加湿器的咨询。
您所需要的资料今天已经寄出了，请查收。如果您对敝公司产品还有任何问题，请直接拨打02-2666-1234 与客服部的李小姐联系。
再次感谢您的关注和支持。
HM公司 谨上
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英文正文

Dear Mr. Smith,

Thank you for your inquiry regarding the humidifiers UL9982001. The information you want has been sent to you today. Please kindly check.
If you have further questions about this product, please contact Miss Lee at our Service Department. Her direct number is 666-1234.
Thanks again for your attention and support.

Sincerely yours,
HM Corporation

ccsspp454

今天的话题是“感谢关照”
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中文正文：
亲爱的玛丽：

写这封信是为了表达感谢之情。
在我参观贵国期间，多谢您的热情款待。这是我第一次在海外待两个月之久，开始还有些紧张。但是您把我当成自己家中的一员，让我感觉毫无拘束。
请代我向您的家人致上诚挚的问候及特别的感谢。
期待尽快收到您的来信。

献上最诚挚的问候，
凯萨琳
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英文正文：
Dear Mary，
This is to express my appreciation.
I would like to thank you for your enthusiasm and hospitality during my visit to your country. It was my first experience staying overseas for two months, so I was a little nervous in the beginning. However, you treated me like a member of your family and made me feel at home.
Please give my pure-hearted regards and special thanks to your family.
I look forward to hearing from you again as soon as possible.

Kindest regards,
Catharine


  

ccsspp454

ccsspp454 发表于 2012-9-1 05:26

                               
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今天的话题是“感谢关照”
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中文正文：

2010.07.15 小雨转晴
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今天的话题是“样品寄送通知”
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中文正文：
亲爱的华尔先生：

通知您订购的样品已经在今天委托联邦快递寄出了。我同时也把价格表和颜色样本附在里面。如果收到货物，请立即通知我。多谢！

期待您的回应。

HY 公司 谨上
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Dear Mr. Wall,
I am going to advise you that the samples you requested were shipped today by Federal Express. I have attached a price list and color swatches, too. Please inform me immediately when they arrive. Thanks a lot!
I am looking forward to your feedback.
Sincerely yours,
HY Company

YL2468

很实用的，我们那些客户都要发英文邮件，学习了。

志利

很不错的学习资料！

子文

好吧，我承认，我是英语白痴~~

yhbao001

很好的模板

Q168

Please give my special thanks to your friends.
I look forward to hearing from your latest information as soon as possible.

YYting0809

很不错哦，希望楼主继续更新。。学习学习。。。

Jim

The opening and closing are pretty good; however, it appears the body is empty. Why do I say so? You should think of adding more details to your products, for example: your customers, your technological advantages, and your company introduction.

If I were your potential customer or interested in your product, I would not impress by what you had said. So here instead of stating "If you have further questions about this product, please contact Miss Lee at our Service Department", you should take the lead to detail your products, your advantages, your factory, your production and your customers.